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The Secrets of the Old Planet Pt. 1 . Sorry I wasnt here a long time, but here is my second star wars comic (not same series as agent x). And I think this one is much more epic. Well, enjoy. . In the village of Surya, after the daily zombie battle, Nandi and his friend were victorious, as usual. Nandi's friend was almost dying. Nandi: "Please dont die my friend" Other guy:"sorry my friend but I think its too late" Nandi :"Pease dont die, just keep your eyes on me" other guy :"soooo...rrrrr...yyyyy" Just then, a hooded figure appeared on awesome bike Hooded figure :"can I help you ?" Nandi :"Are you a dark lord ?" Hooded figure :"What ? no, I'm a Jedi" Nandi :"oh, sorry for judging you. By the way, I need your help, my friend is dying, can you please check if he's alive ?" Hooded figure :"sure" Listening to the heart and making strange emmmms Hooded figure :"sorry, he passed away" Nandi :"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO....." Hooded figure :"dont be so dramatic, its not a movie" Nandi"oh sorry, i'll jump down" jumps down Talking. Nandi :"so, what's your name hooded figure ?" Hooded figure :"my name is Arjuna" Just then, three zombies appeared. zombie 1,2 and 3:"grrrrrrrrrraaaa! The battle starts. Zombie 2:"what is that, its squary and it has a round thing ?" Zombie 2 :"oh wait, its a camera, hi mom" Nandi throws his trident at zombie 1 Zombie 1 scream to his real death. Arjuna opens his light saber and uses the force to throw away zombie 3 Zombie 3 flies away...... And lands on Zombie 2 the heroes came out victorious The village chief comes and gives them the heroes trophy Again, out of nowhere comes another hooded figure and stabs the chief with his light saber Chief:'ahhhhhhrrrrrgggghhh...." Chief :"my last order is GET THAT MAN" Arjuna strikes at the hooded figure but the hooded figure blocks it :( and then he jumps away and runs away (or walks away) arrrhhhhhhhheeeerrrrhhh ~!!! Nandi growls. Nandi :"he got away" Arjuna:"i dont think it was a he, it was a SHE" Arjuna :"i'll call for some backup" he dials... On the other end of the line :"hello" blah blah blah blah...."ok I'll come" the voice said Again out of no where, appear 3 Jedi knights. Jedi 1, Draupadi, jedi 2, Shiva, and Jedi 3, Chandresh Shiva :"so, we are here, you called us right ?" Arjuna :"yes I did. the Chief died, and we wanted to help us guard the rest of the village and make a ceremony for the burial of the Chief." Everyone :"ok" The Ceremony. Meanwhile...a thief escapes with the battle plans of the village. Guard :" hey, he's escaping, with our plans" The guard shoots and hits the zipline. The thief falls and is captured....to be continued !~


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